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A Poem for Him by ~Kalimey:iconKalimey:



A Poem for Him


i stood before Your throne,
Music playing in my ear.
Your voice was speaking to me,
But i didn't seem to hear.

You said, "come stand before Me,
And worship who I am."
But i was undeserving,
And didn't give a damn.

You called out saying, "I love you,"
and You pulled me to Your side.
And as You did the tears came down,
and away crumbled my pride.

My feet gave out bellow me,
and i fell down to my knees.
You gave me all Your love
i had never even said please.

You wrapped me in a blanket
full of loving warmth and care.
You said, "You are forgiven,
My blood with you i share."

So i stand before your throne now
Unworthy and ashamed.
But by Your grace i have been covered,
By Your blood i am renamed.
©2007-2009 ~Kalimey
:iconkalimey:

Author's Comments

To the Trinity: Christ who speaks to me, God who commands me, and the Holy Spirit who comforts me.

The 'i's are lower case to show my inferiority.
Tell me what you think.

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:iconanimelvr:
I really like this poem. I love how you've captured the unselfish love that God gives to us. The lowercase i was also a nice touch. Wonderful job. ^^

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Don't touch my bread! It's mine I tell you....MINE!!!!
:iconstreamrose:
Very good. Some never seem to see God, and they don't realise he cares all the same. :+fav:
:iconkalimey:
God is amazing that way :) . Thank you for reading, and for the favorite!

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.
:iconkalimey:
I would agree with you 100% on that! thank you for favoriting it. ^_^

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.
:iconanimelvr:
You're welcome! ^^

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Don't touch my bread! It's mine I tell you....MINE!!!!
:iconstreamrose:
you are welcome. who are Ceasar and Marcus (i should know, but don't) and what happened to them?
:iconkalimey:
wow, your gallery is awesome. do you color with pencils? you do an amazing job!

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.
:iconkalimey:
Marcus and Caesar were really good friends in ancient Rome. Through a strange twist of events Marcus-- with a group of anti Caesar conspirators-- killed Caesar. After a short while Marcus killed himself from the guilt of having earlier killed his best friend.

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.
:iconanimelvr:
Aww! Thank you very much! And yes I do. I don't like how the colors show up though when they get on the computer. >< They look much better in real life. *nod*

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Don't touch my bread! It's mine I tell you....MINE!!!!
:iconkalimey:
i understand completely. I once did a --not so good-- colored in drawing, and when i scanned it in it looked way worse..... thats when i decided not to post it. but yours look really good. I wish i could color half as good as you can!

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.

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